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sasho [114]
2 years ago
14

Rewrite the short story so it is more dramatic and descriptive.

English
1 answer:
KATRIN_1 [288]2 years ago
3 0

Answer:

He was prone to disobedience on the playground as a sixth-grader at Elmwood Elementary School. Nobody, not even teachers, could convince him to stop being a bully from kindergarten forward. The first day of sixth school, he looked around the class to see which of his buddies he could trust, when a new girl walked in. She was lovely in Jackson's eyes. He will no longer use bullying as a means of getting what he wants. He offered the lady to come and see the schwith with him during their conversation. The other youngsters were relieved.

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hehe lucky for you I have read the odyssey

Explanation:

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2) Cyclopes have no laws, no community, no agriculture, in seeing this, the crew and Odysseus see them as barbaric because with no laws or community they are savages and that they don't care about the gods.

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3) (this one is honestly Odysseus fault, he never explains to his men >:/, wait actually he might have told them not fully sure)

When Odysseus crew stops by on an island they are hungry and tired. So they decide to look for food. Odysseus is told by the sun god(I think that's the god) that they can stay and hunt, but they must not eat the cattle of the sun. Odysseus tells his men not to eat the cattle and to hunt for something else. At this point the men are already tired of Odysseus and his orders, but nobody disobeys him until Odysseus falls asleep, Once he is asleep Eurylochus causes a mutiny and said to the crew that "it's better to die at sea from the wrath of the gods, he said, than to die of hunger"(I don't know the citing). The men then kill and eat the cattle, which resulted in all of the crew dying leaving Odysseus alone.

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I'm sorry if this isn't enough, its been a couple months since I read it so y e a h, hope this helps :). haha I think we are in the same grade

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