The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
Low supply demand stayed the same = high prices
If this is multiple choice you need to add the choices.
Answer: A (The use or a speaker who is not the poet)
Explanation: Ap3x (I just did it)
Answer:
learn to stand up for yourself
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