In night, Wiesel and his father evacuated from the Auschwitz concentration camp because "they are assigned to work as laborers in a factory at another camp, Buna".
After spending three weeks in Auschwitz, Elie Wiesel and his father are moved to Buna, a different concentration camp, where they would serve as workers. The soldiers must transfer to the forefront boundaries of battle for the German army's last-ditch defense.
Eliezer is hired and given a job counting electrical parts in an industrial factory. Due to the fact that they were scheduled to labor as factory employees at Buna, another concentration camp, Wiesel and his father left Auschwitz in the middle of the night.
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That there pretty awful by his words in the first couple of lines
Claim- weak and to oppinionated
Support- informal, gramaticly inaccurate, uses words like "cool" and "Totally", uses evidence from an irrelevant source
Conclusion- not really a conclusion. one sentence is not a conclusion and it doesnt sum up the rest of the argument.
pov- is written in first person when it should be written in third person.
Transitions- no transitions
My just adding quotation marks before the word and after the work life for example :
This author has multiple article some of the articles are " blank of art", "apples and strawberries", and " insects."
p.s. The names of the articles I just made up to show the examples so they are not real just to let you know.