No, the correct sentence would be
I read a book called "The War Between the States"
Answer: The effects from 9/11 are mainly the lives lost and the spot where the twin towers used to be is now a small memorial spot with the names with everyone that died. There is also the fact that people have to go through that day every year.
Explanation:
The answer is D: word choice and length of sentences.
If you don't have answer choices, I would say either peer editing or reading it aloud and listening for errors.