The writing can be made more precise by revising the underlined phrase by either: created powerful speeches, or by crafted meaningful speeches.
<h3>What are speeches?</h3>
Speeches are the ability that can express ones feelings and thoughts by the way of words those are framed in such a manner that are understood by the listeners easily.
Therefore, revising the above mentioned words like created powerful speeches, crafted meaningful speeches, will make the speech more precise.
C- correct a mistaken view The author is correcting the idea that Harriet Ida Pickens and Frances Wills were the first African American women to serve in the navy.
