In the dialogue, there should be a paragraph
break:
<span>A.
</span>after the word rain
Paragraph break is a line or indention which marks the
division between two paragraphs. This is used to emphasize an introduction of
ideas different from the ones stated beforehand.
<span>Metaphor
it is comparing the world to a stage, without using like or as.</span>
Yeah I think so bc I like the first one but the second one i think it’s correct also but I feel as if it could be “that” but I think your correct