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Nata [24]
2 years ago
6

Is this a good structured essay

English
2 answers:
svp [43]2 years ago
7 0

Answer:

I would say no.

Explanation:

There are multiple grammatical errors in this essay and overall it just needs some refinement. The sentences are a little short and there is no evidence to support the claim.

Good luck! Hope this helps!

ad-work [718]2 years ago
4 0
Some of the grammar is incorrect, some parts don’t really make a lot of sense. you have to read some parts multiple times to understand and i think the vocabulary could be more advanced depending on what grade you’re in, but besides that good job
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