The
correct answer is:
B)
Leaving the cottage, the happy couple made sure to lock the front door.
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The modifier “leaving the cottage” refers to the
subject ‘the happy couple’ and in the sentence, it is clear that the modifier
is describing the subject. The phrase isn’t misplaced anymore and thus not a
dangling modifier anymore.</span>
Answer:
A
Explanation:
it is simple not compond...
Answer:
Anne Frank recieved her diary when she was 13. She died at 15.
Explanation:
I looked it up online and found the question related to this personal statement. It is the following:
Why does the writer need to revise the personal statement?
A. sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name.
B. sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was.
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
D. sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.
Answer:
The reason why the writer needs to revise the personal statement is:
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
Explanation:
<u>A personal statement is supposed to be a brief description of oneself in connection to the career one wishes to pursue. It should mention one's experience, education, and strengths in relation to that field. However, mentioning money should be avoided.</u> The personal statement is not the "place" to do so. Instead of sounding ambitious in a good way, talking about "good money" - as the writer did in the passage we are analyzing here - may make one sound shallow.
