This paragraph can be improved by modifying certain words and phrases not only to make it more precise but also to make it more accurate.
For example "a bunch" which is too general could be replaced by a specific number of texts you read or just avoid the expression. Then, you can modify "on the topic you just mentioned" specifying what the topic is.
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Shakespeare's greatest contribution to literature would probably be the variety of material that he produced during his lifetime. He wrote histories, such as Julius Caesar. He wrote love stories, most famously Romeo and Juliet. He also wrote comedies such as The Taming of the Shrew.
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Perceives? Recessive? could be one or the other
6. him
8. them
those are the only 2 I believe you got wrong.