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Alexus [3.1K]
2 years ago
11

Hello! I need to write a story, but I do not have a creative idea for the story. I wrote the first paragraph of the story, so pl

ease continue the story that I began. Please and thank you! Moreover, there is a requirement that we need to follow, so please check the requirement too! *I will use this as a resource and change it in my own word, so please continue the story with a creative idea! Please help!*
This is the story that I wrote, and please continue:
It was a peaceful Friday evening. Hara's best friend Victoria came to Hara's house at 7 pm. We were playing, but the leaves were slowly falling, the sun was setting, and we quietly began to hear the wind. Hara and Victoria were sitting near the fireplace, reading a book. Hara and Victoria were just about to finish the second and last page of the book when they suddenly heard a noise. Suddenly, the light went off and on, and then I got goosebumps all over my body. It sounded like crackle electricity, and it turned off before we could even guess what it was. Ceiling lights, air conditioning, and TV. His fireplace was Electric, so it went out too. It was pitch-black darkness everywhere. On a dark autumn night, the electricity in my house just went out...

Your story should include all of the following:
Creation of a mysterious, ominous setting
Use of short sentences and quick dialogue
Inclusion of mysterious characters
Inclusion of mysterious objects
Highlight your story according to the key below
A minimum of four paragraphs in length

Be sure to highlight each of the writing techniques in your story as follows:
√ All techniques that relate to the setting should be highlighted in pink
√ All techniques that relate to pacing, use of short sentences, and quick dialogue should be highlighted in blue
√ All techniques that relate to mysterious characters or objects should be highlighted in yellow
Note: If you cannot highlight, then type "setting," "pacing," and "mysterious characters/objects" in parentheses-next to your descriptions.
English
2 answers:
Veseljchak [2.6K]2 years ago
8 0

Explanation:

"Hara? Hara? This isn't funny! Turn on the lights! Hara!". "Hara won't be with you anymore," says a mysterious looming voice. Victoria shivers, and screams. "Hara! Stop it." "I told you, there is no more Hara. It's just you and I, forever." Victoria runs, frantically reaching for a light switch in the seemingly endless room. Suddenly, seeing a silhouette of her friend she screams "Hara? Is that you?". The silhouette turns around, to reveal a disorted face of Hara. "There is no more Hara." Says the silhouette, in a frightening voice.

kari74 [83]2 years ago
3 0

Answer:

i just added some sentence in ur story if it couldn't help u sorry for that

Explanation:

we both were scared and we hear some noise in kitchen.victoria caught my hand and we went to kitchen to look there.we found plates and spoon here and there which make us more scary. suddenly a flash of light came from the windows and when we look there we say the dangerous green eyes. we were so scary and after a while all lights turn on and we notice that its was my cat tommy. then we took a deep breath and relax for while...... ..... to be continue

hope it will help u 2%

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