The sentences that contain language inappropriate for a formal email are I just know I'd be an awesome fit for the role. I believe that I am considerate, popular and hard working. Of the the other members in the team, I have more experience than the rest of that lot put together.
In these words, Carla writes in a way that makes it appear as though she is conceited and acting very proud of herself. When conducting business with a new associate or executive, making a formal inquiry, or communicating about a job, a formal email is utilised. While writing a Formal email we should be very much considerate about the language we use and we should be polite while talking about others.
