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I think it is good. However, I think it would be better if you had explained the description of Alice and Edgar before you went into the part with "Alice stared at Edgar with warm but concerned eyes. He glanced back at her and quietly asked, "What's wrong, Mama?".
I thought this because it went from William to Alice/Edgar which was kind of a confusing jump (I thought Alice was the wife). Overall, it was really good.
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This is the meaning of twinge. ☺☺
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<h3>Sudden short pain or an unpleasant emotion. </h3>
Foreshadowing. The like “he wanted to show that date ruled peoples lives and those who interferes with it did so to their sorrow” may prove it. I could be wrong tho.
I had to memorize this story, so i'm pretty sure <span>Macbeth saw </span>Banquo's ghost<span> at the banquet.
hope this helps :)</span>