I was walking alone near a supermarket at 9 pm. As I was about to cross the road I remembered that I had left my wallet at home, with all my money in it. I scolded and complained to myself for being so casual about my commitments, but I had to go back home to get my wallet, as there was nothing else I could do.
I took a deep breath and started walking back to the house. Halfway there, I was hit by a violent rain. "Excellent!" I thought, "It was just what I needed to make my day more perfect," I said angrily. I started to run so I wouldn't get soaked when I heard a noise near a tree. It was the meowing of a kitten that was freezing to death, trying to protect itself from the rain at the tubular roots of the tree. I got close to it and it flinched in fear, but I caught it lovingly and tucked it under my jacket. All my anger began to pass and I realized that fate had planned for me to forget my wallet so I could help a stray kitten.
The error is a mistake in tenses. Turning is a present tense while was is a past tense...If you wanted to correct this, you might say...
As I turned the corner, the post office was on my right.
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Good start. make sure when someone is speaking put the question mark in the quotations or any other puncuation in the quotations. check over commas. Ex. he said, "hello." check spelling. check puncuation. over all good story. great job.
True.
Figures of speech such as metaphors, similes, and allusions go beyond the literal meanings of the words
