Answer:
Mrs Jones is shocked to find... (climax)
Mrs Jones cooks... (exposition)
Mrs Jones regrets... (falling action)
Mrs Jones find the drawing... (rising action)
Explanation:
Original:
Successive governments have consistently failed to ring-fence a significant annual fund for cycling provision<u>,</u><u> </u>from within the transport budget. We have been joined by the Automobile Association Australian Cycling and Shane Page<u>, </u>in supporting calls for an annual budget of $20 per capita. We urge all parties to pledge this fund in their election manifestos. Australia leads the world in competitive cycling - it is time<u>,</u><u> </u>we did the same for our commuters.
Answer:
Successive governments have consistently failed to ring-fence a significant annual fund for cycling provision from within the transport budget. We have been joined by the Automobile Association Australian Cycling and Shane Page in supporting calls for an annual budget of $20 per capita. We urge all parties to pledge this fund in their election manifestos. Australia leads the world in competitive cycling - it is time we did the same for our commuters.
(I'm pretty sure you remove all of the commas in this paragraph)
