“Diana woke up on an oddly warm winter day. She ran down the stairs. She quickly ate her breakfast. She headed out the door. She
went to her friend Mellissa’s house to work on their act for the talent show. She loved to dance. She knew Mellissa was a good partner for the show. She was ready.” What makes this passage weak? A. It needs to be proofread B. It lacks a variety of sentence structure C. There are no issues D. It is full of clichés
The text lacks any sort of flow from one sentence to the next. The usage of commas should be involved here, as well as less periods. E.g., "She loved to dance, and she knew Mellissa was a good partner for the show."
