Question

Read the passage. What is an effective way to rewrite the passage to avoid redundancy and wordiness?

Answer 1

Answer:

C

Explanation:

This passage is clear and concise, while still maintaining a central focus, heich is that A. People like sugary foods and B. they can lead to weight gain

Answer 2

C. All the other paragraphs kept repeating the word “sweet” or “sugary”