Read the passage. What is an effective way to rewrite the passage to avoid redundancy and wordiness?

English

2 answers:

Cerrena [4.2K]3 years ago

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Answer:

Explanation:

This passage is clear and concise, while still maintaining a central focus, heich is that A. People like sugary foods and B. they can lead to weight gain

saw5 [17]3 years ago

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C. All the other paragraphs kept repeating the word “sweet” or “sugary”

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