Answer:
I think it's great!
Explanation:
Edit booth with both
space between time and energy with the comma
Space between Lots and the period
change thirty dollar to $30
Malala uses pathos in her speech to persuade the audience to feel a certain way. She has her audience understand what she is saying by using logic and appeals to people's emotions.
The last one I believe is proofread
I believe the answer is D - third person limited