There need to be a comma after Emma and plat turns to planted and visit turns to visited
I would add:
In order to do this, I will first get people to put trees into the deserts. Once the deserts are fully planted with trees, I will ask construction workers to build homes. Families can move here and request to open shops if they wish.
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The analogy in the title “The Many Faces of Nigerian Food" alludes to the ethnic diversity of Nigeria and its diversity in terms of culture.
Explanation:
Nigeria is a diverse nation. It has many ethnicity that have overlapping and different cultural practices of their own.
These ethnicity all interact with each other in the modern world and are able to create modern cuisines along with their own traditional ones.
It is also to be seen that the nation was colonized by the British who had brought their own ideas of Cuisine that persist to this day.
The tea, the coffee and the dishes around toast have persisted.
The homegrown dishes made around Yam and meat of cattle have also persisted to this day and modernized.
The exposition is the answer.
