Question

at the end of the month.
Choose the best revision of the previous sentence.

(A) Although you may not have received the e-mail we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month.
(B) Although you may not have received the e-mail, we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month.
(C) Although you may not have received the e-mail we have been informed, that the division head of the Finance Department, is leaving at the end of the month.
(D) Although you may not have received the e-mail, we have been informed, that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving, at the end of the month.

Answer 1

Answer:

B.

Explanation:

The sentence is too long and it is missing proper punctuations(like a comma). Reading it without punctuation does not provide room for breathing and therefore needs editing. It will be correct if framed like this; Although you may not have received the e-mail, we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month. This sentence has a comma in the right place.