Answer:
Paragraph rewritten with consistency: " In the story, "The Valiant Woman" by J. J. Powers, we find that in judging people we overlook most of the characteristics that draw us to him (them), but we do so without realizing it. You (we) can draw inaccurate conclusions about a person by misjudging their facial expressions, their physical stamina, and their obvious personality traits. When people (we) are blinded by false superiority, they (we) judge a person incorrectly because they (we) fail to see them as they really are."
Explanation:
To generate consistency in the above passage, you must keep the message linked to a single narrative, keeping pronouns fixed to something or someone. For this it is necessary that you when speaking with readers always use the pronouns "we", "us", while, when referring to the people being judged, always use the pronouns "they" and "them". In this way the passage will show consistency, as shown above.
Answer:
I would say C because you wouldn't know if the reader knew more or didn't at all.
Answer:
I think it is D
Explanation:
She showed signs on her face like a frown that she was upset
The Answer is
"and fading years will make you old;
then in their turn will men seem cold,
when you yourself are nipped and grey."
Helen will out grow her beauty and men will stop falling for her. In the end, only her personality will be what remains of her.
