According to the element of style, revise writing to omit needless words is consistent with strunks rules.
The Elements of Style was published by William Strunk Jr. in 1920. This was an important work for the writer as it was among other things his guide to English style that emphasized the importance of concise writing. Since then, Strunk's style guide has been adapted several times.
Powerful sentences are concise. For the same reason that drawings should not contain unnecessary lines and machines should not contain unnecessary parts, sentences should not contain unnecessary words and paragraphs should not contain unnecessary sentences.
This does not require the writer to keep every sentence short, or to avoid all details and treat the subject only in outlines, but rather that every word conveys something. Concise writing are sentences that have been stripped of superfluous things. It is a sentence that puts into practice the rule of "omitting unnecessary words".
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