D. "It gives readers a concrete picture of the quality of the silence." My bad i placed my answer in the wrong place at first.
Answer:
B
Explanation:
This sentence can be written as in B, or it can be written without a comma by changing the structure and word choice. Commas are used to mark pauses so that the emphasis of the sentence is clear and so that the interrupters have the desired effect.
Another way to write this sentence would be:
There really is no way to know in advance.
To do so, I guess I'd say use proper grammar and format.
Although your sister isn't someone to write formally to, if you write properly it's good to do in the end
Lol i assume this is what you mean?
Answer:
The answer is D) When
Explanation:
At first indicates that something happened first.
Last indicates that something is the last thing being said in a sequence.
Next shows that something comes after another.
Answer:
(edit) So sorry about the old answer, I didn't catch the part when you said to explain how the writing engages the readers into it. The writer has presented this is a way that engages the readers by putting in all 5 senses, such as "straining to hear the volcano", "sulphurous stench", etc etc. He has also provided extremely descriptive language, and some figurative language as well. He vividly describes whats going on, and it's like you're right there when it's happening. He even includes dialouge, and writes it in 'first person', which is a great way to let the readers imagine what's going on as if they were there. Hope this helps!
