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I really liked this question. This gives me a lot to think about.
Explanation:
It depends on what age you are and if you are presently experiencing the hardship. If you are very young or very old, than it is my belief that people will pity you more than believe in you. If you are between 25-50 years old, I believe that people will expect more from you, and pity you less. If you had hardships in your past, people will expect more of you now, because you have gained form your experience. If not, they will not have as much confidence or expectations of you.
Answer: D. 2 and 3
In this excerpt, we can see the friendship that has developed between a white and a black character. This inclusion is important, because it challenges various common stereotypes. The text shows that Southern society was complex, and not all white people were bad, just as not all black people were good. This approach was uncommon in abolitionist literature at the time. It also shows how slave owners and their slaves sometimes developed deep friendships.
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Intro paragraph:
Hook
Essential information to understand topic
Thesis
Body paragraphs:
Topic sentence relating to thesis
Evidence
Reasoning/Prove it’s relevant
2 Evidence
Reasoning
Concluding sentence to help transition to next paragraph
Conclusion paragraph
Rephrase thesis to state your argument again
Universal statement (something reader can relate to)
