I agree
I need 20 words so here they are
The author may describe reading as a positive escape because of their own personal experiences. Books appeal to the readers' emotions as to draw them into the book. Reading can be positive because it betters your brain, and can help you experience things inside of your imagination.
There is no need of comma in this sentence because there are only 2 objects in this sentence which were separated by and ok....
What are the details of the story, or what should I refer too?