An onomatopoeia refers to the property of such word that implies or describe the sound of an animal or natures noise. Base on that, the sample words in the seven ages of man that implies an onomatopoeia are the MEWLING and PUKING in the nurse's arm, WHINING school boy, SIGHING like furnace, WHISTLES in his sound. I hope this would help
I think you should add a little bit more details for words. Like who your dad was or where he would work. talk about family or talk about the month or your thoughts about it.