Question

how do you turn this rambling sentence into a regular one? ''My sister wanted to ride the roller coaster, but it was raining, so we couldn't, so we saw a movie instead, and on the way home we stopped for ice cream.''

Answer 1

My sister wanted to ride the roller coaster, but it was raining, so we couldn't. We saw a movie instead, and on the way home we stopped for ice cream.

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