Rule 1! HAVE FUN!
The Golden Rule: Treat others the way you want to be treated. That is, you shouldn't be rude or offensive, nor should you threaten or physically/verbally abuse anyone.
Follow Rachel's Challenge.
Don't be exclusive, be inclusive, be extrinsic, be extensive, be wild, respectful, and joyful!
Work hard in school.
Answer:
Personally I think the 3rd one would be the best revised
Explanation: While the others are well put this one puts everything into correct context and where it makes the most sense.
Again not 100% sure been awhile since I took English, but it sounds right to me.
Winter Dreams" just like The Great Gatsby is one of Fitzgerald's diatribes against the Old Money class in American society and its seeming false offer of equality to those who believe in the American Dream. In the story, Dexter observes the wealthy golfers for whom he caddies and believes that if he works hard enough, he can one day be just like them. He envisions scenes where he drives up in luxurious cars and the wealthy surround him simply to listen to him speak.
Dexter does work hard and becomes wealthy, but once he makes it to the top, he realizes that the dream has become corrupted (just like Daisy is the corrupted version of Gatsby's dream and can never live up to his expectations).
Both of these works present Fitzgerald's frustration with his own life and attempts to achieve the American Dream. He, like Dexter and Gatsby, became interested in a wealthy socialite (Zelda) and was looked down upon by her social class and family. When he finally did win Zelda and marry her, he endured a tumultuous relationship with her where their wealth was unstable and their faithfulness to one another questionable. He believed (as he demonstrates in "Winter Dream") that the Old Money portion of society corrupts the moral, decent Midwesterner.
The caption develops the central idea by using a certain tone.
<u>Explanation</u>:
- The narrator tells that women are not choosing to protest wearing veils. The narrator is very proud of wearing a veil. The narrator is telling that wearing the veil is important.
- The narrator is going to leave his studies. The narrator tells that those Iranian people who are living in poverty have to work very hard to get out of poverty. He is telling us that each people in Iranian society will have different opinions.
