It's a run on. It is easy to fix.
Jackson is a very smart little boy. He can count to twenty and is only two years old.
<span>Both can be written in prose, which can make the piece more relatable to the average reader. By not being written in poetry, the piece can also take a tone that is more conversational in style. This allows the writer to have a bit more leeway when it comes to using other literary devices to make their points.</span>
you should start it with an opinion. for example : Romeo and Juliet was the most tragic love story in history. (or if you disagree) Romeo and Juliet was the most simpleminded story ever! after that you should use some evidents to back up your claim. basic reasons why you think what you think. I hope i helped <3 (writing is sumthin dats simple for me lemme kno if u need anymore help)