Try this site called The muse it gives guidelines for editing writing
The answer would be either magnifying clues or fleshing reactions.
(2 or 4)
Answer:
ok also if this is for homework change it up a bit incase they have originallity report also this is like a dhar man script
Explanation:
Hi friend 1 hi friend 2 wanna go to the mall friend 1 ok friend 2 goes to the mall
robber 1 EVERYBODY GET ON THE GROUND friend 1 ok friend 2 ok
robber 1 HEY YOU WHATS YOUR NAME friend 1 friend 1
robber 1 WELL THATS SOME NICE JEWLERY GIVE ME IT friend 1 please no its was my grandmothers robber 1 WELL I DONT CARE friend 2 punches robber
robber 1 panicks and friend 2 and robber have huge fight friend 2 wins the fight but is badly injured robber 1 gets arrested friend 2 has serious injuries and will die if he does get treated but he doesnt have enough money. friend 1 is sad and post the story on go fund me. overnight go fund me page blows up. Friend one gives money for treatment to friend 2. Friend 2 lives and happy ever after.
Penelope basically tells the suitors that the man who can string the bow and shoot an arrow through 12 axe heads will win her hand and marriage. So disguised as a beggar Odysseus successfully strings the bow and grabs an arrow and shoots it straight through 12 axe heads. Eventually he makes his way back to Penelope but she isn’t convinced is really him. So she tells him that he can sleep outside her room on the bed on the bed that Odysseus carved. Oddysseus snapped and asked her who moved the his bed that was carved straight from the roots of a olive tree that the room was built around. Penelope knew that only he would have known about the bed so she instantly knew it was him.