To help you out just say it was a very poetic poem and the line that stuck out to me was the line where it says “ So Eden sank to grief” then to explain say that you felt a connection when it said Eden sank to grief meaning that he was so sad about something that he fell into despair then for what does the line make you think about just say it makes me think about either a personal feeling or something else
Yw
Answer:
"and i sat down, got up, ate my ice cream, realized i ran out, and cried"
It's about magic, right? so try this:Use other words such as MysteriousRealmsSpirit"....The realm/ world beyond...."
FantasyLove
Trust
Bonds
"....It is not fantasy that family....."".....A family filled with love fosters trust...."".....With the true power of a trusting bond...."ForgivenessPardonGraceHypocriticalMercy...
GraveEphemeral,and maybe even throw in some French, and words for basic words such as, instead of amazing,putAstounding
"..... a wow factor..." instead of love
Adore
instead of smell,
aromainstead of mysteriousenigmatic
"....his/her enigmatic presence..."I really hope this helped youAsk again if you want more info
it helps give them the mentality if i study and work hard I can do anything I want.
