Which of the following would make a better thesis statement for an argumentative essay? Governments should offer tax breaks to r
estaurant chains that serve healthy options, so that Americans can reap the benefits of fewer medical bills and smaller waistlines. Many restaurant chains are beginning to offer healthier options to the American public.
Governments should offer tax breaks to restaurant chains that serve healthy options, so that Americans can reap the benefits of fewer medical bills and smaller waistlines.
Explanation:
This sentence presents a focused, specific opinion, as well as the supporting reasons.
The other sentence contains neither an opinion, nor supporting ideas.
