Can someone help me out I don't think my answer is right

In a written piece (two or three paragraphs most likely to form a discussion) you need a topic sentence, supporting sentences and a concluding sentence to form a well developed paragraph.

For your question, a brief discussion could be described in three paragraphs by discussing it as follows:

1. Interpretations of observations

Ask yourself the questions: What have you observed? Are there any irregularities that you need to note from the experiment versus what should happen theoretically?

2. Interpretations of results

Ask yourself the questions: What results have you observed? Are the results what you initially expected would happen?

3. Conclusions drawn from results

Ask yourseld the questions: What can you deduce from the experiment? What do the observations you have observe mean and how do they inform or differ from the experiment? What can you deduce from the results? What does the results of the experiment relate in theoretical measures?

In each paragraph discuss your own interpretations of the experiment in describing your observations first, then describing your interpretations of the results and lastly discuss your conclusions you have come up with as a result of your interpretations.

Explanation:

In constructing a paragraph for each point you wish to discuss in your answer please note the following for paragraph structure:

Topic Sentence: Introduces the idea or point of discussion for the paragraph

Supporting Sentences: Elaborate and provide more information on your point of discussion in the paragraph.

Concluding Sentence: Relates directly to your topic sentence and ends off your point of view within the topic of discussion.

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3 years ago

(LC)Match the sentence to its correct label. (5 points)

Sladkaya [172]

Answer:

1. She played video games all day long without stopping. - c. Immature Writing

2. Without ceasing, she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games all day long. - b. Mature Writing

3. For what had the quality of time interminable, she toiled merrily at her digital amusement. - a. Overuse of Thesaurus

Explanation:

Let's take a look at each sentence.

Sentence number 1 uses a very simple vocabulary. In a sense, there is nothing special about it. No vivid descriptions, no word choice to help us picture the actions or sense the feelings. Therefore, it is an example of immature writing.

Sentence 2 is the opposite of 1. It uses more complex and descriptive words. Instead of simply saying "she played video games", the author makes it an action really worth telling with "she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games." It sounds more exciting, and we can see her, the character, in action. Therefore, number 2 is an example of mature writing.

Finally, sentence 3 goes to an extreme when it comes to the use of complex or unusual words. It seems as if the author wanted to sound smart, so he/she exaggerated in the use of the Thesaurus. That, as a matter of fact, makes it much more difficult to comprehend the message being conveyed.

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3 years ago

how could using multiple methods of organization strengthen your explanatory writing? how would multiple methods weaken your wri

Feliz [49]

You can show multiple points of view which could be negative or positive. It could be good because it can give reads more than one way to see an issue however, it could be bad because it could confuse readers or your writing could become repetitive.

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3 years ago