An element in an effective argument is logical support because if you are trying to make you're argument effective, you need logical support to help your argument. Hope this helps!
What story is this suppose to be
Answer: Because we believed everything our parents told us-
Explanation: We were gullible children. lol-
I believe from what I see that every sentence has been turned from present tense to past tense. One example could be Number 5- Instead of, 'Peter is going to take the package later.", it could be in past tense, as in Peter already took the package- "Later, Peter took the package."
Hope this helped. Let me know if you have any more questions!
