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Answer 1

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The paragraph begins with a quote , which takes away from the writer's control.- APEX

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Answer 2

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The problem with this quotation is the use of the verb "say" and the displacement of the subject "Amanda Brier."

Explanation:

In formal and academic writing, some verbs like "say" to report indirect speech are not considered correct since they do not fit in the context. A better option can be the use of the verb "state" or "express." Besides, it is better to follow the subject, verb, complement structure. Thus, a better option could be the following one:

Amanda Brier, director of the Commission for Just Punishments, states that "The death penalty is a cruel and unusual form of punishment for crime."