I would put a comma before and or leave the comma out
Answer:
b. He asked if I would help him with that essay as he would have to hand it in the tomorrow.
Answer:
the second one
Explanation:
it makes a little bit more sense
Notes should be easy to follow to maintain the speakers train of thought
<span>Okay, so to make this sentence more interesting we have to add more detail. Watch:
Before:
I am swinging.
After:
I am swinging on my big green porch swing with fluffy cushions, listening to the birds chirping and letting the sun hit my face and warm my entire body as I lean my head back and take a deep breath of air that smells of flowers and fresh cut grass.
<span>Does that make sense?</span></span>
