Yes, it does, the sentence should be written like this: Beth, my two year old sister, is very curious, so I have to keep a close eye on her.
<span>2nd choice. just read it out loud and see which sounds best</span>
The climate was pleasant and cozy, it brought a pure breathable and inspiring air, probably because of the amount of exuberant, admirable and beautiful vegetation, which filled the place with a mastery capable of surprising the most emotionless of the creatures. With the presence of large fruit trees, we were able to delight in all the wonders that this garden offered, in addition to enjoying the most delicious aroma of flowers that presented themselves with the most varied species: roses, orchids, daisies, violets, chrysanthemums, jasmine and so many others that have equal beauty and aroma. It was totally possible to sit on one of the benches left by some parts and enjoy the scenery, write poems, paint pictures, or just get inspired and be influenced by the power of nature.
