Some things were that you go home and don't have sex emediately. also when you where gonna get married you would sometimes get threatend by the father if you said no to marry her.
Answer:
I think the paragraph is really well-written, but I would reccoment not starting the last sentence with the word "and".
Explanation:
Jeannette is more comfortable with Dinitia because Dinitia doesn't judge her for how she looks, or how she lives.
