Answer:
An onomatopoeia is a very special thing. It's a word like quack or flutter, or oink or boom or zing.
Explanation:
<span>B. The women aren't comfortable being there.
The fact that they enter slowly shows that they are nervous about going inside. Also, the fact that they huddle close together and make sure they stick with each other also reinforces the fact that they are not comfortable with being there. </span>
There correct answer is A. He pried the sandwich from Kirby's cold stiff fingers.
This is how the sentence should read: <em>He pried the sandwich from Kirby's cold, stiff fingers. </em>
Everything looks good so far, label the last paragraph as conclusion.
Make sure to note where the thesis is restated.
"For instance, they can make squeaky noises...etc" is something you can highlight and label as an example/supporting detail. Same goes for your examples in your other body paragraphs.
If its your essay just double check that it transitions smoothly, and you're good to go!
Hope this helps :)