Read this introductory paragraph, which is missing an important element. There was a time when robots and home automation were j
ust a fantasy. Robots were found only in science fiction and home automation was limited to cartoon families who had every convenience at their fingertips. Meals arrived with a simple push of a button. A robot maid performed every task humans didn’t care to do. What is it missing?
An Introductory paragraph is one of the crucial elements of an effective essay as it primarily functions to grab the readers' attention(through a hook or topic sentence), reveal the author's claim or point of view(through a thesis statement), and provide necessary background information that would help the readers' in understanding the narrator's message effectively.
The given introductory paragraph includes a hook('there was..fantasy'), background information('Robots..fingertips'), and they together set the tone but it misses a crucial element i.e. 'thesis statement' which would help in revealing the key point or claim to the readers. It offers a summarized version of the key argument of the essay that the author is going to deal with and since it is missing, the author's point of view is not established.
The Romans wanted their art to be useful and to tell future generations about life in the past. This helps to give us with a clear picture of life in Ancient Rome. Some painted pictures depicted important Roman battles and other historical events, giving future generations with history lessons.
A Bachelor of Arts typically leads to lifetime earnings four times greater than that of a high school graduate. I believe a Bachelor of Science is more, then a Masters and finally a Professional degree.
They would support it because mussolinist is a very important role for business workers like them and if business workers don't have that kind of information they wouldn't be able to have their job.
