Her whining gave me a constant headache?!?
Answer:
Limited and ommicent (dont know how to spell ommicent)
Explanation:
Third person uses he,her,she,they,them but also has two forms of third person, limited, and ommicent, limited is when the reader only knows one characters thoughts, while ommicent knows multiple characters thoughts
Answer:
It is acceptable!! good job:))
The second and last sentences use the most florid language and are thus more interesting to a reader.
Hope this helps.
