This argument<span> is probably important in some way, and in your body paragraphs, you should address opposing viewpoints. Thus, a </span>conclusion<span> for an </span>argumentative essay<span> should let the reader know why the topic you're writing about is important, and why you think your point of view is the right one</span>
Okay so I see some errors. Like<span> "he actually wrapped my arm in a bandage-like way once he thought" this is worded weirdly and awkwardly. Work on your comma's through out the piece.
It is very funny, especially the end I enjoyed it.
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