Answer:
I think that they should arrive at the house and then they should have a conversation, you should include humor and towards the end of the conversation you can include Seth saying that he likes her and she says the same. She should then explain that that is why she calls him pretty boy and she always acts snooping around him and you should end it with Seth winning the bet but giving back whatever was given to him for the bet because he and sila are now in love.
Explanation:
I know that sounded so corny but that is just what came to my mind, I love your story and would love to read more stories if you write anymore! Keep up the good work!
Answer:
There is a shift
Provided should say provide.
It starts in present-tense then shifts to past-tense.
Explanation:
Although a ballet dancer's pointed shoes appear dainty and delicate, their rigid tips provided incredible support, allowing dancers to balance on the tips of their toes.
In my opinion it would be B. I choose this answer since it sounds more appropriate in this sentence and it makes more sense. From using the word "well" it makes it slide off your tongue better while saying the sentence. Its hard to explain it more but i hope this helped! :D
