Answer:
Ella busca un vestido nuevo
Ella canta mientras se baña
Ella mira a través de la ventana
Ella regresa muy cansada del trabajo
Ella termina su tarea muy rápido
Ella toma un nuevo curso en la universidad
Ella viaja todo los fines de semana
Explanation:
According to the example given; it is written in present simple tense which it explains about habits and routines .
Here is your text with the adjustments. I've erased all the redundant information, which made it easier to read. Next, I added some suggested places in which you should insert your sources.
I haven't put the text's correction here because it exceeded the character limits.
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The 'paragraph' is not a paragraph, because almost all the sentences are incomplete, choppy, or run-on.
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