Answer:
1. On the third line you wrote enormus, it's meant to be enormous
2. "you would always be put down and act like you were less than a person by white people" - I don't really understand what your trying to imply
3. "While using public transportation you were treated like a " - Use 'Black people' not 'you' since this is the subject.
4. "Colored people were even forced to sit in the back of the bus even if it was empty. " - I thought they were meant to stand?
5. "find a colored bathroom because some" - What colour bathroom?
6. "6 million of them around 1924." - Good use of statistics
7. " the KKK also" - The place where you mention Ku Klux Klan, put in brackets KKK
Overall, this is a strong 500-word essay. This is a good and informative essay as well so you should be proud of yourself.
Explanation:
Controlling appetite and weight, social reasons, low self-esteem, peer pressure, risk taking.
A) Luisa Rivera blew the bubble
