Is this for English??? If so is this a poem assignment?
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer: enhypen
It's like a polaroid love
사랑 촌스런 그 감정
근데 내 가슴이 뛰어
왜 나 이래 나? (야)
왜 사랑에 목 매는 건지?
어차피 뻔한 감정이잖아
분명 다 안다 믿었지
알고도 빠진 함정인가 봐
나도 모르게 when you call my name
가슴 아프게 나의 심장이 쿵쿵
It's like a polaroid love
사랑 촌스런 그 감정
근데 내 가슴이 뛰어
왜 나 이래 나?
It's like a polaroid love
내 뜻대로 되지 않아
흔한 filter조차 없어
But I love the vibe (yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)
Answer:
<u>from the book: "The Lady, or the Tiger" by Frank R. Stockton</u>
Explanation:
The original paragraph in the book where we get this quote reads;
"When a subject was accused of a crime of sufficient importance to interest the king, public notice was given that on an appointed day <em>the fate of the accused person would be decided in the king's arena, a structure which well deserved its name, </em>for, although its form and plan were borrowed from afar, its purpose emanated solely from the brain of this man, who, every barleycorn a king, knew no tradition to which he owed more allegiance than pleased his fancy, and who ingrafted on every adopted form of human thought and action the rich growth of his barbaric idealism."
the first answer is C and the second is D
