I don't know how many paragraphs your professor needs you to develop, but if your essay consists on just 3 paragraphs (introduction, body and conclusion) your thesis is OK.
Now, if your essay needs to have, lets say 4 or 5 paragraphs (introduction, body 1, body 2, body 3, and conclusion) I'd recommend you to add two more details to your essay. For example,
Schizophrenia is a severe mental illness that deeply affects not only the patient's daily life, but also his family and friends.
paragraph 1 is to develop how schizophrenia affects the patient daily life only. Paragraph 2 is to develop how schizophrenia affects the patient's family and paragraph 3 to develop how it affects his or her family.
Don't forget to put examples, professors love when you put examples.
Good luck, and if you need help, you can ask me.
The lower ratio would be bob and that dude need to slow down the hair stuff
10 to 8 ratio is about 8.00
7 to 6 ratio is about 9.00
im not to good at math so dubble cheek just in case hope i could help tho
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Answer:
=7
Step-by-step explanation:
Answer:
25/2
Step-by-step explanation:
D = 5, E = 10 and F = 4,
D• E/F
5 * 10/4
Multiply and Divide from left to right
50/4
25/2
Answer:
It's D or 1/7^2

Step-by-step explanation:
They both equal 1/49