Answer:
Lothar told Keith, "After the game, I'm going to try and see if Tomas, the owner of the red car will give me a ride because I don't want to walk home. "
Explanation:
I think it would be that you need a comma between "Tomas" and "The"
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Answer & Explanation: I have had great many travels by air and land and sea but I have never had one in a train before. This changed when I arrived London for the very first time. I have always had this idea that train journeys are long and stressful. However, they can be very short too, especially if you are on really fast trains like the one I had boarded. It was a train that conveyed me to towards the baggage train area where I was able to pick up my bags. It was an experience I would never forget - one that I am fond of.
Answer:
Third person point of view belongs to the person.
They and he are third person pronouns.
These are the answers.
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the third one, if you add the comma without the when then you would have a comma splice (when you put a comma between 2 independent clauses without a conjunction) adding the when before Cynthia makes the first part a dependent variable and makes it okay to add the comma!
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