Hi! you need to find his phrases and and maybe change them to his perspective? like “my dream job” would wither be “his dream job” or instead about saying elijah as YOU were talking about him then change it to HIS perspective like “ I went to an interview for MY dream job” does that make sense lol?
I wish i didn't have to go. I am very busy.
Hope this helps , danielle x
Focusing on Passepartout’s perspective makes the story
objective. Passepartout doesn’t have a personal bias or have anything to prove
so he doesn't react impulsively or affectionately. (Greenleafable,
Brainly)“Being much less cool-headed than Mr. Fogg, he was
much more restless, counting and recounting the days passed over, uttering
maledictions when the train stopped, and accusing it of sluggishness, and
mentally blaming Mr. Fogg for not having bribed the engineer. The worthy fellow
was ignorant that, while it was possible by such means to hasten the rate of a
steamer, it could not be done on the railway.” This is a quote showing that the
narrator is telling the story from third person, not Passepartou from first, thus giving the story a more real and relatable aspect to it.
