Answer:Given that school is cancelled tomorrow, will we still be expected to do our homework?
Explanation: The sentence is punctuated correctly.
Relationships between the x and y values.
Answer:
(Have) a nice time in Rome?
Explanation:
"You a nice time in Rome?" Doesn't make any sense because a person can't be time, they can only have time.
In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.