The argument is ineffective and can be improved significantly. First of all, he writes the claim in the first person. A formal persuasive essay should be in the form of third person. The author can improve his support by using less opinions and back-up his thesis with facts and evidence and does not take a strong stance on the conclusion clincher. The author also does not efficiently connect his essay. There is no cohesion and his diction is weak. He can improve it by using stronger vocabulary.
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Explanation:
B chose b
ps: can u give this answer as a smartness pls
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Collected from all simples that
have virtue
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Under the moon, can save the thing
from death
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That is but scratch'd withal: I'll
touch my point
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With this contagion, that, if I
gall him slightly,<span>It may be death.</span>
<span>It describes the poison that he will use on his sword.</span></span></span><span>
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c. but when he came home the next week, alive, renowned . . . it seemed to us that the partiality of providence for an undeserving reptile had reached a point where it was open to criticism.
This option talks about the return of someone who the narrator sees as being evil like a reptile. Everyone seems to have hoped that the man was dead. However, the man returns seemingly unchanged. Options A, B, and C are statements of fact and observation without any personal emotion or appeal in them to create humor.
